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	<title>Comments on: First chapters and the Writing Show</title>
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	<description>One girl, one dream ... and a whole lot of procrastination</description>
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		<title>By: Struggling with style for my novel</title>
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		<dc:creator>Struggling with style for my novel</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Jan 2009 00:34:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] a style of its own or not. I just looked up the feedback I received from the Writing Show&#8217;s first chapter makeover contest. I submitted the then-current version of the first chapter of this novel that I&#8217;m [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] a style of its own or not. I just looked up the feedback I received from the Writing Show&#8217;s first chapter makeover contest. I submitted the then-current version of the first chapter of this novel that I&#8217;m [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Writing and book shows: Podcasts are keeping me inspired</title>
		<link>http://becomingafictionwriter.com/2008/04/first-chapters-and-the-writing-show/comment-page-1/#comment-68</link>
		<dc:creator>Writing and book shows: Podcasts are keeping me inspired</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 May 2008 09:42:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] list of favourites is Paula Berinstein&#8217;s The Writing Show. I&#8217;ve mentioned their various first chapter contests before but there&#8217;s a lot more there that captures my attention. For example, they have a [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] list of favourites is Paula Berinstein&#8217;s The Writing Show. I&#8217;ve mentioned their various first chapter contests before but there&#8217;s a lot more there that captures my attention. For example, they have a [...]</p>
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		<title>By: My novel&#8217;s title could make it a bestseller!</title>
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		<dc:creator>My novel&#8217;s title could make it a bestseller!</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 10 May 2008 05:27:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] with a decent title for the novel I&#8217;m revising ever since it came back from the Writing Show makeover contest labelled &#8220;Untitled&#8221;. I felt sad for my poor manuscript and resolved to come up with a [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] with a decent title for the novel I&#8217;m revising ever since it came back from the Writing Show makeover contest labelled &#8220;Untitled&#8221;. I felt sad for my poor manuscript and resolved to come up with a [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Jeff Bilman</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jeff Bilman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Apr 2008 08:35:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Amanda

Good to see you&#039;re still writing (a lot by the looks of it!  Sorry I haven&#039;t visited for quite a while).

Cheers

Jeff</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Amanda</p>
<p>Good to see you&#8217;re still writing (a lot by the looks of it!  Sorry I haven&#8217;t visited for quite a while).</p>
<p>Cheers</p>
<p>Jeff</p>
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