Surprising myself with a short story for the Christmas season
With my teaching load finally reduced (I’ve been doing extra work at that job for the past three months or so – there’s a massive shortage of ESL teachers in Perth!), this week I have actually had two days at home to get my writing work done. Of course, I actually need about three or four, but two days is certainly better than one. And it was great timing because I’ve been trying to write a Christmas-themed short story for a contest which closes tomorrow.
The idea for the story has been sitting in my head for ages – well years, actually, since I visited “the real Santa” in Finnish Lapland a few Christmases back. But I had almost given up hope of having time to get the story out and looking good in time for this contest deadline, until I woke up early this morning and realised that I had enough time to give it a go and still make the rest of my regular writing deadlines today.
The story is half fun and half serious, but I had a lot of fun writing it. And the best surprise of all was the ending, because it changed. About half way through I suddenly remembered the advice I’d used in the last 24-hour short story contest: to lead the plot towards a twist, and then suddenly twist again in the other direction! And I managed to do that with this story (successfully, I hope) and I really rather like it. And it’s quite rare that I say that about a short story I’ve written – I often despise them later.
Anyway, the result of the morning’s work is that after having no more than an outline, I now have a 2,500 word short story sitting on the dinner table to edit later. (And take at least 250 words out, using Stephen King’s 10% rule!). Of course, I may already despise it by the time I read it again later on, but I hope not, and in any case it’ll definitely be heading in to the contest tomorrow.








Good luck on your short story. I’m still at the beginning of mine. Would you post an excerpt of it in your blog? Would love to read it and know your fiction style.
I’ve always thought that the judge panel for the Booker would be this erudite snobby know it all bunch but how can some people who don’t know much about books choose a literary giant? Also, I love Peter Carey’s Oscar and Lucinda which won a Booker a few years back. He’s Aussie, isn’t he?
Hi Kate, Fair enough, I could post an excerpt (I’m so shy about showing my fiction but I really shouldn’t be, it doesn’t help anyone!). Will do that soon.
Yep Peter Carey is an Aussie – actually I’m just reading a book he wrote about Sydney (more memoir I guess) – “30 Days in Sydney” – it’s fascinating, so yes, I’m a fan too.
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