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My novel’s not an award winner, but here’s useful feedback

27 November 2008 4 Comments

Remember how I insanely finished my novel to enter the TAG Hungerford contest? I knew that a last-minute finish was a bad thing for that novel, but the value for me of actually getting something finished to enter the contest far outweighed the inevitability of not getting anywhere with the contest. But now that the award procedure is almost over (there are three shortlisted novels now, although the winner won’t be announced until February 2009), I’ve got even more value out of the process.

I recently received a “thanks but no thanks” letter from the Hungerford crew, but with it came something very interesting – a judges’ report on the process. Not on my manuscript in particular, but a general overview of how the judges felt, and a few of the points they made were especially interesting to me:

  • There were 28 entries. Apparently this is less than the previous couple of years, but not a bad number. I was surprised it was so low. There are some two million people living in Western Australia now, and the only requirement for entry is that you have not previously published a book. But perhaps it’s really not that common to get a full-length novel ready for submission. Anyway, it’s almost encouraging that there might be less competition out there than I thought.
  • Most of the entries were “realist fictions”, a category into which my manuscript would also land. The judges mentioned that many seemed to be written based on personal experience (yes, some of mine falls in this category too). Trying to write further away from my personal experience is something I’ve been trying to do with this NaNoWriMo novel and it’s been quite freeing. But it’s not easy – after all, doesn’t every writing class say, “Write what you know”?
  • Major problems including careless plotting, poorly-constructed characters, badly-handled dialogue and bad spelling and punctuation. My passion for apostrophes and their relatives rules me out of the last one, I’m fairly confident, but the first three problems – well, I probably still need practice with all of these. But apparently so do lots of other writers!

Future novel contests for me

So, practice, practice, and more practice is needed, I think, to improve my writing skills, and a whole lot of editing too. But entering these kinds of contests – respectable ones that could lead to a “big break” for a writing career – is an important goal of my writing, so I’d like to keep the future contests in mind:

  • The TAG Hungerford contest is running every two years at the moment, so presumably my next deadline there is June 2010.
  • The Australian/Vogel award, which is for writers under the age of 35 (a couple more years!), is usually held every year, so I hope to have a novel ready – no, I will have a novel ready – for May 2009. And May 2010. And I think I still scrape in for May 2011, but that’ll be the last one.

Know any more good novel contests? Please let me know in the comments.

4 Comments »

  • Guy Salvidge said:

    Bad luck Amanda. I got the same letter :(

    Anyway, along with the Hungerford and Vogel there are a couple of other things I’ve had my eye on. There was an ABC novel prize in 2008 that I missed the boat on, as well as an Overland novel prize. Last time I checked Overland weren’t taking submissions anymore, but that might have changed. Another promising looking one is something called the IP Picks awards. I hadn’t heard of this until I read about it on the writingwa website. I can’t think of any others, but I know that there’s more.

  • amanda (author) said:

    Thanks for the commiserations Guy, let’s just decide we’re both in good company then!

    I’ll check into that IP Picks award, I haven’t heard of that before. Your mention of the ABC rang a bell – do you mean this one? Also I recently saw the Amazon breakthrough novel prize and I just double-checked and Australian entrants are allowed … but of course the competition would be stiff! Let me know if you find any more, Guy (or anybody!) and happy writing.

  • zannahjane said:

    This is precisely the reason I didn’t enter NaNoWriMo. I had started my novel already and I knew leaning on it with all my might for a month was only going to produce something that needed to be completely re-written. Instead, I used the hype of the contest to get myself going and got a big chunk of useful stuff written. Sure, I’m only at 35000 words, but it’s worth it knowing that most of it is good material.

  • amanda (author) said:

    Zannahjane, good thinking – I like the idea of using the atmosphere of NaNoWriMo to get some quality writing done and not just quantity. Good luck with finishing it!

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