Becoming A Fiction Writer
One girl, one dream … and a whole lot of procrastination
February 10, 2009 by amanda

My novel’s finished, but will never be finished

As I did my recent big edit of my first novel, I kept a list of ideas and thoughts of things I might like to change in the story or stuff that I thought might still be able to be improved. Because I was finishing it up with a deadline in mind (to submit it to the ABNA contest), then the list still exists. I didn’t do every single thing I’d thought of.

Will my novel ever be finished, really?

That’s a very good question. Some of the stuff on the list is mere speculation – could I include some extra description here or there for a character or setting – stuff I would need to sit down and really consider if it improves the novel in any way or not; just ideas that I had as I went along, basically.

Other points on the “still to do” list are about character development – could I go through the novel again and smooth out the development over time of the main characters a little bit more? The main reason this is still on the list is that I tried to do this, and couldn’t. I simply couldn’t read with “new enough” eyes to figure out what a normal reader would understand about a character through actions and description as the story moves along, and therefore I was unable to really plot the development of the characters. Perhaps this is something I could do if I set the novel aside for another couple of months and came back with fresh eyes again; perhaps it’s something I’ll get better at doing with more experience.

Are any novels really finished?

After much angst, I realised that my husband is the same with his paintings, and I felt a little better. There are dozens of his canvases that were considered good enough to bring all the way here from Germany, but most of them are in a pile in the wardrobe because they’re unfinished. What’s more, the paintings that hang on our wall – that everyone who sees them, including me, assumes are finished – mostly also belong to the “unfinished” category, according to the artist.

A while ago I heard an interview with a novelist – I just can’t remember who it was – who said that she never reads her published novels again if she can help it – because she always finds things that she would change. That gives me still more reason to think I’m not insane here but perhaps even a little bit normal.

Can anyone help me out here? Whatever your artistic endeavour, do you actually reach a point where you’re happy with it and truly believe it’s “finished”? Let me know in the comments.

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February 8, 2009 by amanda

Getting into some great Australian fiction

I’ve had a truly fantastic couple of reading months, and finding a bunch of great novels has definitely helped inspire me to try to write better. When I looked back at my library borrowing list over the last weeks, I realised that I’ve had a sudden trend towards reading Australian novels – partly in preparation for the Perth Writers Festival but also because Australian writers are producing such good stuff!

When I lived overseas, obviously it wasn’t that easy to keep up with the Australian writing scene but now I’m finally getting back in touch with it – and it’s a real pleasure. I thought I’d share some of these recent great reads with you – both for my Aussie readers who have probably heard about these books and those of you in other far flung corners who might enjoy hearing what Australia has to offer.

  • First up, you might remember how excited I was when the library emailed me to say that my reserved copy of Helen Garner’s The Spare Room had arrived – and my excitement was well-founded. This was a surprisingly easy read in that I’d expected it to be a bit more depressing – it is, after all, about a woman’s friend dying pretty much right in front of her, slowly and painfully – but it’s much more than that, because it’s so honest and, without meaning to be cliched, “refreshing”. It’s the kind of book that makes me really admire that a writer can make the writing process seem so effortless – you almost don’t notice the words.
  • I was even more excited to finally get a copy of Christos Tsiolkas’s The Slap (still unavailable on Amazon – why is the world being denied this book?). I can’t say enough about this book, it was definitely my favourite of 2008. Any writer who wants to write about normal, modern-day life (like I do) has to read this – as does anyone living in the Australia of the early 21st century, or anyone who wants to know what it’s like. It’s brutally honest, the kind of book that tells you all the gory truth of everyday life in a way that makes you cringe about some parts of your own life. Told through the viewpoints of a series of characters, it’s also incredible that Tsiolkas makes each character so clear for the reader, in a story that has the potential to be confusing with quite a large cast of characters who are all equally important. If you’re overseas and can’t get The Slap yet (I’ll update this when you can!) then start with Loaded to get a flavour of his work.
  • My next couple of Aussie authors have Western Australian connections, although neither can strictly be called locals – but with a lot of their fiction being set around my home state, I have an extra degree of interest in them. The first is Robert Drewe, and in the last month I read both his semi-fictional The Shark Net: Memories and Murder and his short story collection, The Rip. The Shark Net is set in the Perth that my parents came to when they moved to the city for work as teenagers, so it was great for me to get a picture of life at that time. The short stories in The Rip are also more engaging than any short stories I’ve read in a long time.
  • Finally, I just finished Julienne van Loon’s Beneath the Bloodwood Tree, her second novel after her Vogel/Allen & Unwin-winning Road Story. I read Road Story some time ago and hadn’t connected that this was the same writer until I read some of the blurb about it, but I remember really enjoying it. Beneath the Bloodwood Tree is set in the Pilbara region of Western Australia where I’ve spent a bit of time; it reminded me in some ways of my favourite Nikki Gemmell novel Cleave. Great characters, good plot and enough left up to the reader’s imagination to keep it interesting.

Well, I hope that I can inspire some of my non-Aussie readers to try out some Australian literature – we might not be too famous for it, but I promise there’s some great stuff. And a challenge to my Australian readers – please let me know what great Aussie novels I’ve been missing out on – leave me a note in the comments.


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February 4, 2009 by amanda

15-day challenge and Amazon contest: success!

No doubt some of you have been wondering how I went with my 15-day creation challenge and my goal of getting my novel ready for the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award. The good news is: I did it!

Procrastination overcome by short-term goals

I really have to shout out a huge thank you to Zoe at Essential Prose for coming up with this 15-day challenge. The goal was to choose a project and work on it for an hour a day for 15 days. I’m actually pretty amazed at how well this worked.

Perhaps knowing that this intensive work would only last for 15 days helped me to keep doing it night after night – because I nearly always worked on my novel last thing at night, after all my paid work had got done – and having picked a project that I thought I could finish within the 15 days really helped. I think there were only one or two days that I didn’t do a full hour of work on my novel editing, but in each case I had done closer to two hours the day before so I didn’t feel too bad.

When the Amazon contest opened on Monday (Sunday night in the States, but that was 2pm on Monday here – right when I was in the middle of class and had to nervously wait a couple of hours and hope the first 10,000 entrants hadn’t already got their novels in) I was ready to go. And I was pretty pleased with myself, I have to say. Again, this is not a contest I expect to get anywhere in, but the motivation to complete my big edit in time to enter was perfect. (And given that entry was free, it’s been a great motivator all round).

What’s my next 15-day challenge?

Since this 15-day creation challenge worked out so well, I’m already thinking of what my next one will be. Since the rewrite I’ve just done goes a long way towards satisfying my second goal for 2009 I think I’ll concentrate on making progress towards the third goal instead, which is to get my second novel ready to submit in May. So my next 15-day challenge will be related to finishing the draft of that novel. I’ll have to take a closer look at how much I’ve done – and I seem to recall I have quite a lot of outlining done – and see if finishing the draft in 15 days is realistic, or a sub-goal of that instead. Stay tuned – and try the 15 day thing yourself if you feel like it will help! Let me know if it does. Or share your own anti-procrastination tricks, too.

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