Recently I mused on the topic of removing flaws from a novel: in my case, it was flaws of timing with a skiing scene happening in summer and a fun park swim going on in the middle of winter, a confusion which was a result of some heavy rearranging and not enough attention to detail.
The odd thing is that since I discovered this difficulty myself, I keep finding it in books that I expect better from – but I certainly know how tricky it is now and shouldn’t complain, I …