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December 31, 2009 by amanda

2010′s New Year’s resolutions might be a little flexible …

Happy 2010

Oops. I just looked back at the writing resolutions I made for 2009. There were just four of them, and in any average year I think they would’ve been pretty achievable. But this wasn’t such an average year, as you’ll guess by my dropping out of the blogosphere for half of it.

Just the same,  I did manage to partially achieve some of my 2009 resolutions. The second goal was to finish revising Kanako’s Foreigner and submit it to agents; well, I finished revising it, submitted it to the ABNA contest and got into the top 100 – which attracted the attention of one agent, who emailed me to ask to see the full manuscript. She passed on it, but certainly didn’t criticise it heavily, giving me the confidence that it’s worth submitting some more (after I revise it, again!). So, that’s about all I achieved out of 2009′s goals: what should I do for 2010?

First up, I have to be clear that 2010 will be a year of surprises. For those of you who haven’t heard, we’re expecting our first child in April, and while I know plenty of writers who actually manage to pump out a tonne of writing while looking after a child – more sometimes, because they keep strange hours which can be good for writing – I’m not going to assume that this will be the case for me. Of course, I hope it will be! So, here are my writing resolutions for 2010, certainly more than loosely based on last year’s, and given with the proviso that I just can’t quite crystal ball gaze the year ahead that accurately:

  1. Complete my Bratislava novel to submit to a contest – ABNA or Vogel, depending on when I finish.
  2. Finish revising Kanako’s Foreigner and submit to agents.
  3. Increase readership of this blog, Becoming A Fiction Writer.
  4. Plot and complete my third novel – which involves choosing from a multitude of ideas first.

Now, I see that last year I promised to give a monthly update on how my goals were progressing, which of course is a great idea to make me have some accountability. I failed to do that, but this time I have already programmed it into my To-Do list (I use Remember the Milk – ever tried it? I love it) so the chances are a lot better that I’ll really do this. If not, give me a nudge.

On that note, Happy New Year and I hope all your writing dreams come true in 2010.

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December 29, 2009 by amanda

Nam Le deserves $100,000 for his short stories

When it was announced around two years ago that the new government had created the Prime Minister’s Literary Prize worth A$100,000 for the best fiction and non-fiction books of the year, I was pretty impressed. It’s truly nice to see writers getting some monetary recognition of the thousands of hours of work that go into the writing of a novel – or in the case of the 2009 winner, Nam Le, a collection of short stories.

I’ve been having a bit of an ambivalent relationship with short stories recently. I’d like to write more of them, because they’re obviously a smaller investment of time than a novel, and therefore valuable in the sense of getting practice at polishing my writing and getting some fiction published. But then I feel like a bit of a fraud, because what I really want to do is write novels, and short stories really are an entirely different genre, and it’s not fair to treat them as a “mini novel” just to get some practice. So I’d more or less abandoned reading them when Nam Le’s collection The Boat was announced to be the winner of the 2009 Prime Minister’s Literary Award. Then I figured I had to read it.

Obviously, The Boat is an extremely well-written collection of stories. You can’t fault Nam Le’s writing. And if you look around the web at the various reviews, most people seem to think you can’t fault is diversity, either: the stories range from assassins in Colombia to Vietnamese women on boats to elderly men in America, so Nam Le is clearly able to write way beyond his personal experience.

But. I’m sorry to say there’s a “but”. I really want to adore this collection of stories. And I definitely think that Le deserves his $100,000, for he’s an extremely talented writer, and has got a lot of well-deserved praise. But, personally, I just felt like this collection is too diverse, too unconnected, and I know there’s no rule that says a collection of short stories should be connected but I just felt like they all belonged elsewhere. I mean, I guess if I read these stories elsewhere and independently, I would recognise Nam Le’s style and feel them to be a little connected, but as a book to hold in my hands and read, it just doesn’t do it for me. And my second (related) “but” is that knowing these stories all came from the same author disconcerted me a little; it’s hard to believe that one person could know so much about the life and culture in Iran, Colombia, Vietnam and Australia, all at once. Of course, in a way that’s the sign of a great fiction writer, but I just felt like I couldn’t quite trust him that it’s all how it really is. Okay, enough of my rambling, because obviously thousands of other people love this book, so I’ll leave you to decide for yourselves.

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December 27, 2009 by amanda

Writers: Do your family and friends read what you write?

Last week at one of my favourite blogs, The Professional Hobo, Nora wrote a very nerve-touching post about the lack of support she felt she got from friends when she published her first book – to summarise, she kind of expected a few more of them to buy and read it, and was disappointed when they didn’t. And I had to agree with a lot of her feelings and experiences.

Being a writer is a bit of a mysterious job. Unless you write (and get published, somewhere and somehow) yourself, I think it’s impossible to imagine how it really works. It’s easy to say “I want to write a book one day”, and if I had a dollar for every person who’s told me they think they’ll start doing some blogging “like you do” to earn some money (and think it’s really as easy as they make it sound), then I’d be a very wealthy girl. It’s such an intangible profession, and more so these days when people can make a living writing for the web, for example, rather than having a physical book on the shelves.

Friends and family reading your writing

When I first started getting some articles published, I was quite shy about sharing the results with people I knew. My Mum always got a copy first, of course, and always read it. She still reads a huge amount of what I write, no matter what the topic, and I heartily appreciate that (thanks, Mum! That’s her pictured, and she’s going to kill me for adding this photo). As I got more experienced at the whole publishing gig, and started to make at least half my living out of writing, then I got more confident about sharing magazine articles and website addresses with other family members and friends. But bear in mind, this was pretty much always non-fiction work.

I still have a hard time sharing my fiction work, but after my recent ABNA success have certainly got much better at it. I’m now not too worried about the time, some day in the future, when my friends and family will be able to go into a bookshop and read my novels. (Of course, if strangers read them, I’m more than happy about it. Strange, isn’t it!).

But my point – well, Nora’s point, really – is that a lot of my friends and family will never read any of my writing. Some of them are just not really readers, or might not be interested in the topic I write about, or in many cases have English as a second language and might feel it would be too difficult. But won’t they want to read it just because it came from me?

Apparently not. As an avid reader and writer, my perspective is obviously skewed. Whenever I’ve met someone who’s a published writer – it’s happened a few times that I’ve had colleagues with published novels – I’ve gone straight out to buy their novel, regardless of the topic. These are people I know, they write books, and I want to know what they write about. There’s no question about it for me. And so, unfortunately I guess, I kind of have these expectations about the people closest to me. But I also realise I have to let those expectations go.

So, from now on, I’m going to remember just to be grateful for the handful of family and friends who devotedly read what I write, and who I know will be lining up at their local bookstores one day to not only buy copies of my novels but also to sneakily shift them to more prominent places on the shelves. And I truly thank you people.

Do your family and friends read what you write? How do you feel about it? Let me know in the comments.

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December 24, 2009 by amanda

Christmas: A time for reading and writing, I hope

Santa for BAFW
‘Tis the season to be jolly, and all that, and I hope that it’s also the season to get lots of reading and writing done.

I usually don’t have much of a problem getting a fair bit of reading done, and with a week away from the day job and a bunch of extra public holidays, I’m pretty sure I’ll be able to report back in 2010 with a bunch of great reading recommendations. I just have to hope that the writing goes as well. Well, I shouldn’t hope, rather I should simply make it happen, right? As I’ve done before, with varying success, here I go making a public promise to make substantial progress on my novel revisions during the Christmas break. Please hold me to that.

And in the meantime, all the best wishes of the season to you all, and may Christmas bring you lots of relaxation time and a few good books – and if you’re so inclined, some quiet and successful writing time as well.

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December 23, 2009 by amanda

Making progress on my Bratislava novel

You can see one of Bratislava’s most prominent sights in this picture: the Novy Most, or “New Bridge”, built, as you might be able to guess by its appearance, by the Soviets during the communist era. They’re also responsible for the monstrous collection of bland apartment buildings across the other side of the river (which is the Danube, by the way). You’re seeing a picture of Bratislava because I’m in the middle of writing what I keep calling my “Bratislava novel”, since an actual title hasn’t made itself known to me yet.

I thought I’d give you a bit of an update on how my progress on writing this novel is going. I’ve been mentioning it on and off for a while, mainly because I keep starting and stopping. But with my chance for a second attempt at the ABNA contest drawing near, I’m really keen to get it finished as soon as possible, and hopefully have enough time to give it a good edit before the due date. If you’ve read this blog much at all, you’ll know I’m a great procrastinator and best motivated by deadlines, and that seems to be working again now.

I’ve set myself a goal of writing a minimum of 1,300 words per day, which should give me enough time to get the rest of the novel done and still allow sufficient time for revision and edits. (Well, not quite sufficient, but better than nothing.) And for the past four or five days, I’ve been exceeding this goal. Woo-hoo! I’ve been wondering why I’m on such a roll with this writing, and have come up with a few reasons:

  • I have a chapter-by-chapter plan for this novel. The plan is not very detailed – just a few sentences for each chapter – but when I sit down to write, I know where it’s going. I’m adding and removing quite a lot of the plan as I go, but then adjusting things later on in the plan, and it certainly seems to be making things easier. Being aware that I don’t have much revision time, following a plan like this really seems to be helping.
  • I love the characters. This novel has three equally-shared main characters, and each of them is very different, but I really like them all. Each chapter is told in turn by a different character, so every few days I’m changing perspective, but that’s working well.
  • I’m writing in the first person again (but from the three different perspectives). I struggled over this issue with Kanako’s Foreigner and ended up changing the entire novel from first to third person, but this time it seems to be working out better, perhaps because of the three different personalities.

It’s still a fair way to go before I can say this has been a successful novel completion attempt, but with the holidays ahead (and not much to do during them other than relax) I’m feeling reasonably confident. Keep your fingers crossed for me!

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December 21, 2009 by amanda

Western Australian writers: You should all read Craig Silvey’s novels

I’m a fairly patriotic reader, for two reasons – firstly, I really think there is such great literature coming out of Australia, and secondly, because Australian authors are the ones I’m most likely to be able to see in the flesh. Make that Western Australian and I’m even more patriotic, so this post is a little like one big advertisement for West Aussie writer Craig Silvey.

First off, I should tell you the thing that bugs me the most about Silvey. He’s younger than me (by six years). And he’s already had two novels published (and a children’s book, but let’s just stick to the novels for now). What’s more, they’re both great. I was overseas when his first, Rhubarb, was published, but I picked it up a couple of years later at a second-hand sale and recently devoured it. Set in Fremantle, my hometown’s port, and full of interesting characters, it’s a great read – but the next one’s better.

This year, Jasper Jones was published and it’s one of the best books I’ve read in ages. I read a bunch of reviews suggesting this novel is like the Australian version of To Kill a Mockingbird, and I’d have to agree; it’s delightful and devourable, with a great narrator and characters which really inspire me to improve the characters in my own fiction. A coming-of-age story set in a small Australian country town during the time of the Vietnam war, Jasper Jones covers the events of one (pretty eventful) summer in a teenager’s life. It’s so good that I’m not going to say much more about it, because you should read it first; after you have, go and read what Silvey himself said about the writing of this novel. Meanwhile, I’m looking forward to what he produces next.

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December 18, 2009 by amanda

ABNA 2010 is announced, and other inspiration for me as a writer

Earlier this year I bookmarked a great guest post on The Urban Muse with the title Reignite Your Passion For Words. At the time, my passion for words and writing as a little below par, but the ideas in the post still seemed to ring true.

Now that my writing fingers seem to be flying over the keyboard a bit more regularly, this post is even more useful. And in fact I’ve been unwittingly following most of the strategies mentioned anyway, including:

  • Read more: Lately I’ve been absolutely swallowing books whole. Partly it’s a summer thing – all these daylight hours seem to give me enough energy to read later into the evening, and make me want to sit around outside in the beautiful weather reading during the day. And it’s definitely true for me that reading makes me want to write – either to try to write as well as the author I’ve been reading, or if it’s not a great book, because I think I can write even better.
  • Watch TV or DVDs: I’m usually not a huge fan of watching too much TV, but much to my surprise I’ve recently got hooked on watching The West Wing on DVD – I was living abroad when it first screened here, but now that I’m catching up, I find it really well-written and with interesting plots, and some interesting and wide-ranging ideas.
  • Exercise: or in the original post, Shovel the Driveway (not too useful in a non-snowy country like mine!) – okay, I haven’t used this strategy too much recently. But I agree that it helps inspire you to write – it gives you mental energy and time and space to come up with great ideas.
  • Begin a new project: Well, funny you should say that. The ABNA 2010 contest was recently – ABNA is the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award where last year my novel, Kanako’s Foreigner, made it to the semi-finals – with a submission date of January 25, 2010. Wow, that’s a lot sooner than I expected. But seeing the announcement has definitely got me fired up to, well, not exactly begin a new project, but get back to an old one – I want to try to finish off my “Bratislava novel” (which doesn’t have a cool working title yet, but does have quite a few chapters written) in time for this contest. Go me!
  • Write just for you: Hey, I’ve even been doing this – writing semi-journal entries more often that I don’t expect anyone else to ever read.

So, now that I’m hoping my writing career is a little more on track again, and I’m feeling inspired, then I’m off to try and get some semblance of order into my plot ideas for my Bratislava story, and to get back into some serious writing. January 25 is not much more than a month away. Eeek!!

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December 14, 2009 by amanda

Stella Rimington’s spy stories inspire me (but not to be a spy)

Perth Writers Festival Rimington

In my continuing effort to read outside my preferred genres – and also because Stella Rimington was a special guest at last year’s Perth Writers Festival, and I really liked her (and she appeared outdoors in the sunken garden, pictured above) – I’ve just finished reading her first novel At Risk. Rimington was the first female head of MI5 (the British Secret Service, basically) and after she retired she turned to writing spy novels – which are especially interesting because you know she writes from the voice of experience. It’s a real page-turner, yet it doesn’t feel scrappily-written or trashy, as those typical buy-at-the-airport spy stories have always seemed to me.

Now, to the relevance of a spy novel to what I’m writing: I have a new theory that every good novel needs to be a bit of a spy story. Perhaps not a spy story, but a mystery. In other words, a really important part of a modern novel, even a very literary one, should be that there is information that not everybody knows. It’s something I’ve been working on with my latest novel outline (more thoughts on that in another post).

I guess what I’m saying is that I’m trying to pay more attention to getting the plot right in my novels. And in particular, leaving parts of the plot open or unknown to some or all of the characters, and sometimes to the reader, and so on. This is something I think I’m not very good at. Not all literary fiction does this, of course, but certainly the novels I end up enjoying the most do. Everybody loves a good surprise.

The big problem I have with getting the plot right is that it seems to involve knowing the plot in advance. I’m not so good at writing in this way; sometimes spontaneous works a lot better for me, but the main difficulty I have is that whenever I try to plan a novel, I get half way through the planning stage and really don’t know exactly how things are going to happen next. Of course, I have a good idea of the broad arc of the story, but often not enough of the details to be able to plot in twists or turns or information revelations, because these seem to arise out of exactly what the characters do, something I can’t predict more than a few chapters ahead.

Any other writers out there have some good tips for me on getting my plots right in advance? I really want to capture readers the way I get captured by other novels; sure, you can capture them simply with interesting characters and a story where they want to know the ending, but I really like the idea of spreading out the information across the plotline. Will I ever be able to plot my novels completely in advance? (Allowing, of course, for brainwaves and alternative inspirations during the writing process). I’d love to hear your thoughts in the comments.

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December 10, 2009 by amanda

Presents for writers: The shower-proof notebook

Waterproof notepad in shower for writers

A while back I blogged about writers writing ideas down “anywhere”, including writing on pianos if necessary. And in that post I mentioned that I’d been trying to figure out how to deal with all the great ideas I come up with while in the shower, which seems to be the absolute best place for me to get inspirational brainwaves.

Well, my dear, wonderful mother read that post, and without mentioning it to me, she set to work to solve my problem. She’s obviously a bit cleverer than me, and figured out that waterproof notebooks exist, because there are plenty of professions where people need to take notes while out in the weather (less in the shower, perhaps!), and she set about finding one for me. With her supersleuth web skills she tracked them down at the slightly obscure Forestry Tools store in Sydney and ordered me a few.

I can definitely report that having a waterproof notebook in the shower is the perfect solution for capturing my writing brainstorms. And there’s something quite soothing (if not a little wasteful) about standing under a steady stream of hot water, scribbling my newest idea down. The notebooks themselves are quite amazing – even if they end up soaking wet, they dry out perfectly, and without erasing any of the pencil notes. And just knowing I have one sitting there has freed up my thinking in the shower – I used to stop my train of thought if I was on the track of a good idea, knowing I didn’t want to lose too much of the inspiration – now I can keep thinking and make notes whenever necessary. Thanks Mum!

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December 7, 2009 by amanda

Hesitation on my novel and two books tell me it’s OK

Funny how things work out in life, but they often do. In the ever-present battle I have over deciding whether to spend time rewriting my first novel and then sending it off to agents, or giving it up as a first attempt and moving on to some of my other partly-written novels, I’ve just had an important small victory, in favour of Kanako’s Foreigner (yep, the first novel).

The thing is, one of the plot lines involves the main character fantasizing about a lesbian affair, and I’ve been wondering if that really fits into the story (I mean, it’s a key part of the story, but does it suit it … well, I can’t explain it well). Maybe I’ve been wondering if it’s a good fit with all the multicultural themes. I could argue myself around in circles for hours here, but anyway, the point I want to get to is this: just when I was really wondering about it, I quite by chance read two new Australian novels that also point to this theme. The first was Kalinda Ashton’s The Danger Game, where the theme came up so unexpectedly that I wondered if the book was actually as well-written as I’d initially thought (I even tried to go back in the story to pick up foreshadowing parts that I’d missed), Hot on the heels of finishing reading that novel, I started Andrea Goldsmith’s Reunion and stumbled into the same topic.

And before you ask, it’s not because I was looking for novels featuring lesbian affairs like this to justify my novel – there was no mention of it in the blurbs or anywhere. Pure coincidence? Maybe, but it’s helped me to decide that it’s worth getting back to Kanako’s Foreigner and making a real go out of it. After all, if it reached the Top 100 at Amazon’s contest, it can’t be all bad.

(On a related note, I haven’t been able to link those two novels to Amazon like I usually would – why is it that Australian literature takes so long to be picked up by Amazon? Does it have to have an American publisher first? I don’t know how it works, but I don’t much like it!)

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