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	<title>Comments on: The novel is drafted, the revisions have begun</title>
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	<description>One girl, one dream ... and a whole lot of procrastination</description>
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		<title>By: amanda</title>
		<link>http://becomingafictionwriter.com/2010/01/the-novel-is-drafted-the-revisions-have-begun/comment-page-1/#comment-11458</link>
		<dc:creator>amanda</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 Jan 2010 00:27:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Kristan, Yep I dropped out for a while there but I&#039;m definitely back now (and I&#039;ve been following your writing still, just as a lurker though!). Good to be back :-) A.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Kristan, Yep I dropped out for a while there but I&#8217;m definitely back now (and I&#8217;ve been following your writing still, just as a lurker though!). Good to be back <img src='http://becomingafictionwriter.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' />  A.</p>
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		<title>By: Kristan</title>
		<link>http://becomingafictionwriter.com/2010/01/the-novel-is-drafted-the-revisions-have-begun/comment-page-1/#comment-11456</link>
		<dc:creator>Kristan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Jan 2010 23:40:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ah, you&#039;re back you&#039;re back! I have to admit, it had been so long since you last posted that I took you off my Google Reader. But now you&#039;re back! (Both here and on the Reader.) YAY!
.-= Kristan&#180;s last blog ..&lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/kristanhoffman/~3/hBPXwiPNfQY/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;The gods must be crazy&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ah, you&#8217;re back you&#8217;re back! I have to admit, it had been so long since you last posted that I took you off my Google Reader. But now you&#8217;re back! (Both here and on the Reader.) YAY!<br />
.-= Kristan&#180;s last blog ..<a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/kristanhoffman/~3/hBPXwiPNfQY/" rel="nofollow">The gods must be crazy</a> =-.</p>
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		<title>By: amanda</title>
		<link>http://becomingafictionwriter.com/2010/01/the-novel-is-drafted-the-revisions-have-begun/comment-page-1/#comment-11453</link>
		<dc:creator>amanda</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jan 2010 23:21:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the good wishes, Jay.

Had a quick look at AutoCrit - for other readers, it&#039;s a site that analyses your manuscript in terms of stuff like overused words and phrases. It analysed the first 800 words of my novel for free but I didn&#039;t find the results that impressive - it told me I used &quot;it&quot; and &quot;there&quot; too much, but also said that in 800 words, 10 uses of adverbs (-ly) was no problem - I think that&#039;s too many! Having said that if you paid for the full version it might find a lot of problems but I&#039;m going to do it the hard way with my own hard work for now ...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the good wishes, Jay.</p>
<p>Had a quick look at AutoCrit &#8211; for other readers, it&#8217;s a site that analyses your manuscript in terms of stuff like overused words and phrases. It analysed the first 800 words of my novel for free but I didn&#8217;t find the results that impressive &#8211; it told me I used &#8220;it&#8221; and &#8220;there&#8221; too much, but also said that in 800 words, 10 uses of adverbs (-ly) was no problem &#8211; I think that&#8217;s too many! Having said that if you paid for the full version it might find a lot of problems but I&#8217;m going to do it the hard way with my own hard work for now &#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Jay Tee</title>
		<link>http://becomingafictionwriter.com/2010/01/the-novel-is-drafted-the-revisions-have-begun/comment-page-1/#comment-11452</link>
		<dc:creator>Jay Tee</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jan 2010 22:19:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good luck!

You might also want to check out the AutoCrit Editing Wizard. It&#039;s great for speeding up (amd improving) the editing process.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good luck!</p>
<p>You might also want to check out the AutoCrit Editing Wizard. It&#8217;s great for speeding up (amd improving) the editing process.</p>
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