Becoming A Fiction Writer
One girl, one dream … and a whole lot of procrastination
April 21, 2010 by amanda

Internet research tools that make fiction writing more factual (and easier)

There’s nothing worse than reading a novel and coming across a factual error.

I’ll always remember reading a book-I-won’t-name where the narrator explained about where my hometown, Perth, was situated, and what you would reach if you travelled in each direction, as the crow flies. For some reason, the narrator had us hitting the west coast of Africa instead of the east, and it bugged me so much – I re-read the section three times to be sure I had understood correctly – that it tainted my opinion of the whole book.

Now, when I’m writing novels, I’m (so far) setting them in factual places, and places that I know reasonably well but not like my hometown. It’s really important to me that I get the details right, because I don’t want a reader to have the experience I’ve just described above. Of course, I have no doubt that something will be wrong – and I don’t want to become obsessive about it, either, and sometimes you want to use a bit of poetic licence so the place fits the story, anyway … but my point is, with the wonderful world of the internet, these days it’s much easier to get things right anyway. Tools I use all the time while I’m writing include:

Google Maps: My character’s going to drive from Poprad to Kosice, how long should it take? Just ask for directions in Google Maps and I can check that my estimation of a couple of hours is just right. Another character is driving down to Croatia for a summer holiday and needs an overnight spot to stay about half way. Pop into Google Maps and I can pick a reasonably-sized town for them, no worries.

Wikipedia and Wikitravel: So I figure out where the character is going to spend the night, but how do I give the town some local flavour? Hit the web. I also use these sites constantly to double check facts that I think I know, like historical incidents, population figures, famous people, etc.

Google Earth: To be honest, I don’t need an excuse to play around with Google Earth, but to supplement my own experience, memory and photographs, Google Earth is a great way to check the landscape, or go down to Google Street level to see some individual buildings. Love it.

Flickr: My visual imagination is not always perfect, and if I want to describe something accurately and beautifully it sure helps if I can see it “in person”. The great collection of photographs on Flickr pretty much always have something to help me write a good description. I’m pretty sure the photographers who put their photos there didn’t have my purpose in mind when they hit “upload”, but I’m still grateful to them.

Over to you: What internet sites can you simply not do without while you’re writing? I’m hoping to get some good tips! Let me know in the comments.

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April 15, 2010 by amanda

National newspapers write about procrastinating novelists, too

I’m not sure if it’s reassuring or depressing, but earlier this year I read an “Opinion” feature in the National Times called Do the write thing, and it was absolutely familiar stuff to me. Catherine Deveny wrote about the thousands (or probably millions) of people who tell themselves they’re going to write a book, but never do. The key problem: my best friend (fiend?!) procrastination.

Deveny is a comedy writer (something I truly admire – I find that very difficult) and she makes her points in very memorable ways. The first most important point is actually a question:

Do you really want to write? Or do you just want to wake up with a novel written by you on your pillow.

Too true. There is a difference between just craving the accomplishment of being able to call yourself a published novelist, and actually wanting to put the hard work in to do the writing as well. Plenty of people dream of the former. Many of them are those that respond to my “claims” that I’m a writer by saying, “Yes, I’ve always wanted to write a book too. I think I will one day.” I know they won’t, and I get angry that they try to make it sound so easy that anyone could do it. As for me, of course I want to be a published novelist, but the process of writing is also important to me.

Deveny also gives a great example of procrastination and why writers (and others) do it. Speaking of a joint project with an experienced writer, she wrote:

We were working on something that had to be finished by Friday. ”I’ll come over Wednesday morning,” I said. ”No,” he replied, ”I won’t be scared enough. Make it Thursday night.”

Which is me to a tee. Even if you’ve barely dabbled in my website here, you’ll very likely have come across a post describing how I’m desperately trying to finish up a novel or a story to enter it in a contest. A deadline is often the only way I really get something done. I’m constantly trying to get better at that, but it’s a struggle. Better to complete something at the last minute than never complete it at all, I guess, but I’m sure the quality could be higher if I took more time and didn’t always have the pressure of a deadline. Anyway, at least I’m reminded that I’m not alone.

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April 7, 2010 by amanda

Prolific writers: What’s the secret to writing dozens of novels?

Back in January, I read an obituary for American crime fiction writer Robert Parker. The headline labelled him a “prolific author” so I was immediately intrigued, even though I have to admit I’d never heard of him (is he famous out there in genre land? Sorry, I’m a bit ignorant sometimes!). The article says he was among the top ten best-selling authors in the world, so obviously I really am showing my ignorance by not knowing him.

Prolific equaled 65 books in 37 years, something I can’t help but admire, because even if his books aren’t quite my thing, they still got published and that’s no mean feat.  How did he write so much? His routine was simple:

Parker wrote five pages a day, five days a week, 50 weeks a year.

I love that he gave himself a two-week holiday every year! And he had two days off from writing every week, too. Five pages sounds like a very manageable amount, but I do know first hand the effort required to do that day in, day out, even when you don’t feel like it, or are tired, or have so much other stuff happening in your life.

It all got me wondering about how many books I might be able to write in my lifetime. It’s hard to even figure out how long one takes, because I tend to write in strange sporadic bursts, usually when I set myself a really firm target like a contest entry date or something. But I’ve tried to project forward and imagine that I’m a published writer with a publisher expecting the next book by the end of the year. Would I only write what’s contracted or could I do more than that? I certainly don’t think I’m a slow writer, but of course there’s the matter of quality too. It’s all a bit unknown to me still.

I don’t think I’ll publish 65 novels in my lifetime. I’d be really pleased with perhaps a dozen. Heck, right now I’d be really, really pleased with just one, who am I kidding?! But I take my hat off to those prolific writers out there who are obviously really good at sitting down and actually writing. It’s really nowhere near as easy at it looks.

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April 3, 2010 by amanda

The average wage for fiction writers … it can’t be very high

I’m always curious about what kind of things people are searching for when they land on the Becoming A Fiction Writer blog, and luckily Google helps me out well there by providing detailed stats on exactly that. As you’d expect, the vast majority of people are searching on phrases like “being a novel writer” or “how to become a fiction writer”, and I hope they find something of use here.

But somewhat surprisingly, I think, is the fact that I’ve just noticed quite a few readers arrive here by searching for phrases like “average wage for fiction writers“. This is a topic I haven’t talked about until now (so I guess those web surfers might have been disappointed), but it’s interesting that obviously a lot of people are thinking about this.

I wonder if there is really a single fiction writer out there who does it for the money. I’m guessing the answer is no. Of course, if you are successful enough to be able to make a living out of writing fiction, then that’s fantastic, but these people are few and far between, right?

In fact, I’m guessing if you actually calculated the average income from fiction writing across all of the people across the world who write fiction, this figure would be pretty close to zero. A few J. K. Rowlings and Stephen Kings are probably not enough to get fiction writers above a minimum wage in any currency.

As for me, I would love it if one day my fiction writing provided a part-time income. My freelance writing already does, and I find that already really satisfying – but if I could swap that over and get paid to write novels I’d do it in a flash. But I actually wouldn’t want to make enough for it to be considered a full-time income. My theory is that, at least for me, working full-time as a fiction writer just wouldn’t work. I’d be lacking the interaction and stimulation I need to keep having good ideas for writing. I also know I tend to go a bit mad if I stay home alone in front of my computer for too many days at a time. Give me a part-time job with people around me, and the freedom to write novels the rest of the time, and get paid for them (I’m not expecting millions, just enough to get by okay), and I’ll be really happy.

What about you? Do any of my fellow writers out there have specific financial goals for their fiction writing? Is it important to you? Let me know in the comments.

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April 1, 2010 by amanda

March book of the month and ABNA disappointment …

So March is over and it’s time to look back on my reading and writing for the month … as I warned, there hasn’t been much writing. My poor carpal tunnel fingers just won’t take it, and it should be only two or three weeks until they’re back on board so I’m waiting patiently and trying not to stress them too much.

I did, however, hear the bad news that my novel didn’t make it through to the next round of the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Contest. Boo-hoo! Just this morning I got a copy of the reviewers’ feedback (there were two of them, who read just the first chapter) – the good-ish bits include stuff like this:

technically superior writing … this novel has potential … I like the characters as presented … This author can write and do okay dialogue, but the strongest aspect of this excerpt is, oddly enough, also its weakest. The writer can pile up detail after detail, like layers of icing on a cake. Only a further reading of this book could determine whether the cake is sweet enough …this writer has considerable skill

The problems, according to these reviewers, is that it’s not exciting enough and they’re not sure why they’d keep reading. There’s definitely something to that, although I have had great feedback on this first chapter from other sources and I think that part of the problem in the Amazon contest lies in competing against genre fiction – there are a lot of thrillers and science fiction and mystery novels that the reviewers are also reading, so my “subtle, oblique” (their words) lit fic might not be their cup of tea. In any case, I’ve already started revisions and the next version will be even better!

On to my reading update for March, and here’s a list of the books I finished this month (full info with my opinions on each book at my 2010 reading list):

  1. The Imperfectionistsby Tom Rachman
  2. 10 Short Stories You Must Read This Yearby various Australian authors
  3. Hunting and Gatheringby Anna Gavalda
  4. The Book of Raptureby Nikki Gemmell
  5. The Lovely Bonesby Alice Sebold
  6. Juliet, Nakedby Nick Hornby
  7. Conditions of Faithby Alex Miller
  8. The Death of Bunny Munroby Nick Cave
  9. The Paperbark Shoe by Goldie Goldbloom
  10. My Life on A Plateby India Knight
  11. Washington Squareby Henry James

Picking the best is not so obvious for me this month: The Book of Rapture was beautifully written, but in retrospect didn’t quite reach my (admittedly high) expectations; Juliet, Naked was an excellent read, but still not my star pick. I guess I have to go with Conditions of Faith, both for great writing and an interesting storyline. Stick around for the April list though – I’ve got a truly impressive pile of new novels to read and I’m really excited about finding some gems in there that I’ll be recommending highly.

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