Becoming A Fiction Writer
One girl, one dream … and a whole lot of procrastination
July 15, 2010 by amanda

Do you heart writing in cafes? Give me tips!

So as you know I’ve now got a baby, and it probably won’t surprise you at all to hear that this means finding time to write is trickier than ever. I seem to be getting a few windows of opportunity at the end of the day but these windows seem to be quickly filled with doing the writing that pays the bills (necessary) and feeling extraordinarily tired (unavoidable). But rather than waiting until my little boy has grown up – although that sometimes seems the easiest solution to the “when to write” dilemma – I would really like to get a new writing routine going.

I’ve been trying to come up with some good times to get going on my third novel. You may recall I mentioned plotting out a novella and I’m thinking that in fact, it’s probably big enough to become a proper novel instead. Of course, I’m thinking that without even going back and reading all the notes I’ve written because I just don’t have time, but that’s the current thinking. And I’m excited about the ideas within it. For short, let’s just refer to it as my Trans-Siberian novel, but that’s really leaving out a whole lot of important ideas – you’ll just have to wait though, dear reader!

For thinking, plotting and brainstorming, I think there are quite enough moments in the day, as long as I don’t need to write anything down at the time. Out walking while I’m pushing the pram, for example, is quite a relaxing time and probably ideal for brainstorming. Surprisingly, when I’m trying to calm down a crying baby, I also sometimes feel like I’m in a bit of a trance and thinking about something quite removed from the actual crying – sometimes I suddenly notice that my little boy is almost asleep in my arms and I kind of missed what happened in between, being so deep in thought about something else! So why not make this something else my next novel, I figure.

But for actual writing, that’s a bit trickier. Night time is not my creative time, so I really don’t think I can make that work, even if it is the easiest time of the day to find a few spare minutes. I’m thinking cafes. That’s why there’s the very cute hot chocolate picture at the top of this post, although my friend had a latte with a fish on top which was even more impressive. (All at the John Street Cafe, if you’re interested). My plan would go like this: get a parking spot quite far away from one of my favourite cafes. Walk my baby all the way there in the pram so he falls asleep. In the noise of the cafe (curiously, and apparently many babies are like this), he’ll probably stay asleep. I can get a hot chocolate and some writing time. Some very civilised writing time.

This is my current plan, and I just need to schedule a moment to actually do this. I’m surprised how busy life is when you’re not going to some kind of face-to-face employment – I still have a hard time fitting in appointments. But I feel I just need to treat writing like an appointment and then get the momentum going. Otherwise I really won’t get to my next novel draft until my boy is off at school. What do you think? Do you write in cafes or other public places, and how does it go? I’ve never really tried.

And don’t think I’ve forgotten the first two novel drafts, and the need to revise them finally and get them off to agents. I haven’t, but I just haven’t come up with a good plan for that yet. I think half the problem is my usual procrastination, and the other half is probably fear. Don’t worry, I’ll get to it. Baby steps. Get it?!

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July 5, 2010 by amanda

May and June book of the month and a writing update

Ha ha. Tricked myself. I’ve been hunting around on this site for my May book of the month post, taking quite some time to realise there wasn’t one because I didn’t finish any books in May. Oh, how depressing. I did, however, finish a book in June. So I’m combining those months, and giving you an update on my writing progress during that time, all in one (probably pretty brief) post.

The good news is that my beautiful time-drainer has just hit three months of age and is sleeping a lot more consistently, to the point where in these first couple of days of July I’ve read half a book already! So things are looking up on the fiction front.

Without further ado, the book of the month for May and June is … After the Fallby Kylie Ladd. Granted, there was no competition, but it was nonetheless a great book. Kylie Ladd is an Australian author (remember, I love Aussie writers) and I “met” her on Twitter somehow recently, which inspired me to get her book out of the library (sorry Kylie, I know I should have bought it, but I have post-birth-of-baby budget issues!).

After the Fall was particularly interesting to me because it uses chapters written from the point of view of different characters, much like my Bratislava novel draft but with even more characters and no systematic rotation of them. I have to admit to being a little confused at first, because I couldn’t get the names of the characters straight in my head, but that’s probably because I only had a chance to read just a short chapter or two at a time. By the end, that was no problem. I enjoyed seeing how different characters interpreted the same situation differently, a technique I’ve tried to use in Bratislava as well.

And to complete the monthly update, yes, I did actually do some writing in June. And a tiny bit in May too. I finished up this round of edits on Bratislava and submitted it to the Allen & Unwin/Vogel award. Yay! I was desperate to enter this year as I’ll sadly be too old next year. Oh and you may note I say “this round of edits” because even during that process I had some new ideas of some more tinkering I could do. I really hope some publisher will take pity on me someday and just publish all my draft novels so I’m not continually tempted to “fix” them, as I’m sure not all the changes are for the better!

Stay tuned for the July update which I hope will be more a productive month. Fingers crossed.

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March 3, 2010 by amanda

February’s book of the month and a February goal update

First up, the goal-related news … I actually didn’t get much writing at all done in February. Even the posts you saw were mostly written in January, and I’m afraid that’ll be the case for the next couple of months, as I’ve been struck with pregnancy-carpal-tunnel – basically the same as regular carpal tunnel, but a whole lot better, because after I give birth to this kid in April my wrists and hands should return to normal and I’ll be typing away with the best of ‘em. So I’ve had to shelve most of my writing plans for these couple of months, but luckily for you I was pretty organised and have posted ahead with this blog, so you won’t be left too much in the lurch. And I’ll still be dropping by to read your comments.

However, there is one important piece of goal-related news: the next round of the Amazon Breakthrough Novel Contest was announced, and my novel Bratislava has made it to the next round of judging. YAY! This year the contest is divided in half into adult fiction and young adult fiction, so this means that out of 5,000 entries in the adult fiction section, mine is already in the top 1,000. Of course this ABNA deal is always a slow process so it’s another month before I know if I make it to the next round. Keep your fingers crossed for me!

Now, while I haven’t been able to write, I have been able to read a fair bit. As you might’ve seen if you’re following my 2010 reading list (there are some blurbs about what I thought of these books on that list, if you’re curious), this is what I’ve sunk my teeth into during February:

  1. Nocturnes: Five Stories of Music and Nightfallby Kazuo Ishiguro
  2. Absolutionby Olafur Johann Olafsson
  3. The Book Thiefby Markus Zusak
  4. Revolutionary Roadby Richard Yates
  5. The Easter Paradealso by Richard Yates
  6. Like Trees, Walkingby Ravi Howard
  7. Henry’s List of Wrongsby John Scott Shepherd
  8. Friends Like Theseby Danny Wallace
  9. Anna Kareninaby Leo Tolstoy
  10. The Writing Classby Jincy Willett
  11. The Woman from Bratislavaby Leif Davidsen
  12. Dancing Backwardsby Salley Vickers

Ishiguro’s set of stories was, of course, fantastic, but the runaway book of the month winner for me is Zusak’s The Book Thief. READ IT! You might read the blurb and think it’s just another Nazi Germany story but it’s not. It’s one of the best books you’ll ever read. Everything about it is fantastic – the structure, the choice of narrator, the characters and how they grow, the language, the everything! In case you look it up and wonder about the audience – it was billed as adult fiction here in Australia (Zusak is Australian) but for some reason promoted as young adult fiction in the US – whatever your age, you’ll love it. I promise.

On that note, I’ll sign off but will try to get back at the end of March with at least a reading update – probably not much on the goals, although by then I’ll know if my novel survives another Amazon round or not. Happy writing and reading!

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February 19, 2010 by amanda

Fellow writers, do you get bored? I don’t …

“Are you bored yet?” This is the most common question that people have been asking me since I’ve become a bit housebound thanks to some pregnancy dramas. At first, I was a little surprised to be asked. Then it kept happening, and I realised that obviously a lot of people think they would be bored if they were in my situation, “stuck” at home.

Of course, I’d much prefer to be still at work teaching, and also able to get out of the house a bit more (although I don’t miss the supermarket too much!), but I’ve never for a moment felt like I could get bored. I’ve been trying to figure out if it’s just my personality type, and/or how much it is related to being a writer.

My current theory is that writers very rarely get bored. In my case, if I find myself in a boring situation, I find a way to make it interesting or useful for me. For example, last year I was “trapped” in a cinema having to watch a really bad, boring movie because it was part of a compulsory school excursion, and obviously the teacher can’t leave – but she can do something else! I had a notebook and pen in my bag (as always) and in the dim light coming from the movie screen, I made some notes about a story I was writing. Admittedly they were a bit difficult to read later, but thinking about that story stopped me from being bored.

Similarly, now that I’m home most of the time, I really can’t imagine getting bored. I have so many things I want to write, and on top of that, a million books I want to read. And that works out pretty well, because I need to make sure I don’t spend too long doing any one thing – I can’t sit, stand or lie down for long periods of time. Being forced to change tasks quite regularly is even better and keeps my writing fresh. And bored? I don’t have time to be bored.

So now I want to know what you think. Do you get bored? If you’re a writer, in particular, do you get bored less than other people? I’m curious. Please let me know in the comments.

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February 1, 2010 by amanda

NY resolution check-in: The January update, all’s going well

As I promised – a lot more for my benefit than for yours – I’m going to check in at the end of each month to see how my progress is going on my New Year’s resolutions. You know how it is, especially for me, a bit of external pressure knowing that someone out there might be wondering if I’m keeping up my promises or not really helps me to do it.

The great news is that so far, the progress I’m making on my resolutions is pretty excellent! Considering we’re only one twelfth of the way through the year, I’m pretty impressed, if I do say so myself. Naturally, being “stuck” at home by having to leave teaching early has given me a bit more time to keep up with these things (if you missed the NY post, I’m expecting a baby in April, and I wasn’t able to stand up long enough to teach any more! – and tragically my school got shut down last week anyhow, so I would’ve become unemployed if I’d stayed). Anyway, without further ado, I’ll review my goals …

  1. Complete my Bratislava novel to submit to a contest. DONE! I submitted this to Amazon’s contest last week. I would still like to revise it further (I’m really beginning to understand the phrase “art is never finished, only abandoned”) and unless an Amazon miracle happens, perhaps submit it to the Vogel in May. So technically, this goal is complete, but I’d like to do more.
  2. Finish revising Kanako’s Foreigner and submit to agents. Okay, I’ve done absolutely nothing on this goal yet. Although I have been reading a couple of good books about novel writing to improve my technical skills, especially when it comes to revising.
  3. Increase readership of this blog. Doing well. Just looked at my monthly stats and January was actually a record month for the number of visitors to Becoming A Fiction Writer. Onwards and upwards, I say!
  4. Plot and complete my third novel. Obviously, I haven’t gone and done this whole goal in a month. But I have finished the month with a great brainstorm and an already quite detailed outline of the next thing I want to write – although it’s a novella rather than a novel, but I think that still counts. Put it this way, I’m pleased with the progress. I’m going to try out doing much more detailed plotting and planning on this one and see if it is a way I like to write.

Anyway, I think I’m doing pretty well so far. We’ll see if I can keep this up or not. Wouldn’t it be great if I had to set a whole new set of goals half way through the year? Oh, but there’s that baby coming along … maybe not.

How are you doing with your writing goals (or other goals?) for the year?

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January 8, 2010 by amanda

Guest post: Finishing what you write, from Robert Scarlato

I recently got a message from a writer named Robert Scarlato, and although he’s really just starting out, it didn’t take me long to be impressed by both his productivity and his sensible self-marketing. He asked if he could do a guest post here at Becoming A Fiction Writer and I readily agreed:

I used to struggle all the time with writer’s block. After writing one book, from midnight to six am, while still a freshman in high school, I found that one of the best ways to get your writing done is to have someone bully you into finishing. When I met my girlfriend, I showed her the first nine chapters of the book I was trying to write. When she asked what happened next, I had to write further. I didn’t want to disappoint or leave her hanging.

Recently, the block has returned and I was lucky enough to find another method that helps. Start small. Try writing a two-paged short story. Make it about anything. Not only will you become more accustomed to writing, but you’ll have a nice collection of short stories for yourself. That’s how I wrote For What It’s Worth. I was basically trying to write my way out of writer’s block. It seems odd to dig yourself out by typing more words, but it works. Writing seems scary on the surface, the epic battle of person versus paper, but once you just sit down and dig yourself out of a jam with words, the writing flows.

Thanks, Roberto. Anybody else used this methods? Got any more to add? Let us know in the comments.

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January 4, 2010 by amanda

“I’m no quitter” – not of writing, not of chocolate

It’s almost a fortnight since I updated you on the progress I’m making with finishing off the writing of  my Bratislava novel, and I’m proud to say I’m still on track to have it fully written and even pretty well revised and edited in time for the ABNA contest. (Obviously, completed edited with heaps of time to spare would be better, but life just isn’t always like that).

One of my students (thanks, Val!) gave me this mug recently, courtesy of our Margaret River Chocolate Factory – in case you can’t see the graphic, it says:

I’d give up chocolate but I’m no quitter.

Absolutely true for me in the case of chocolate, although in other areas my tendency to procrastinate sometimes means I do end up quitting (or simply not finishing). But this time round my motivation to continue writing every day seems to have no limits. Originally, I set myself the goal of 1,300 words per day to finish off the end of the novel; I’ve been achieving this so easily that I’ve increased it to 1,500 words per day, so I’ll end up with some extra editing time. Many days I’ve done a little more anyway.

Interestingly,  I’ve begun to be tempted to write substantially more each day, because I’m on such a roll, but I’ve deliberately stopped myself. I found that when I did, my writing wasn’t so fresh, and it was harder to start again the next day. The idea of finishing the day’s writing while you’ve still got plenty to say is one that really works for me; I might stop mid-paragraph but leave notes of what I have in mind to write next, and that makes the next day’s beginning very easy. And when I’ve felt like I could just keep on writing, I’ve used that motivation to write other stuff I need to write (you know, like the stuff that pays the mortgage!) so it’s been pretty useful.

So far so good, I’m no quitter when it comes to finishing this novel. Stay tuned to – I’m sure – hear me tell you that I’ve finished it and am loving the editing process!

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December 31, 2009 by amanda

2010′s New Year’s resolutions might be a little flexible …

Happy 2010

Oops. I just looked back at the writing resolutions I made for 2009. There were just four of them, and in any average year I think they would’ve been pretty achievable. But this wasn’t such an average year, as you’ll guess by my dropping out of the blogosphere for half of it.

Just the same,  I did manage to partially achieve some of my 2009 resolutions. The second goal was to finish revising Kanako’s Foreigner and submit it to agents; well, I finished revising it, submitted it to the ABNA contest and got into the top 100 – which attracted the attention of one agent, who emailed me to ask to see the full manuscript. She passed on it, but certainly didn’t criticise it heavily, giving me the confidence that it’s worth submitting some more (after I revise it, again!). So, that’s about all I achieved out of 2009′s goals: what should I do for 2010?

First up, I have to be clear that 2010 will be a year of surprises. For those of you who haven’t heard, we’re expecting our first child in April, and while I know plenty of writers who actually manage to pump out a tonne of writing while looking after a child – more sometimes, because they keep strange hours which can be good for writing – I’m not going to assume that this will be the case for me. Of course, I hope it will be! So, here are my writing resolutions for 2010, certainly more than loosely based on last year’s, and given with the proviso that I just can’t quite crystal ball gaze the year ahead that accurately:

  1. Complete my Bratislava novel to submit to a contest – ABNA or Vogel, depending on when I finish.
  2. Finish revising Kanako’s Foreigner and submit to agents.
  3. Increase readership of this blog, Becoming A Fiction Writer.
  4. Plot and complete my third novel – which involves choosing from a multitude of ideas first.

Now, I see that last year I promised to give a monthly update on how my goals were progressing, which of course is a great idea to make me have some accountability. I failed to do that, but this time I have already programmed it into my To-Do list (I use Remember the Milk – ever tried it? I love it) so the chances are a lot better that I’ll really do this. If not, give me a nudge.

On that note, Happy New Year and I hope all your writing dreams come true in 2010.

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December 27, 2009 by amanda

Writers: Do your family and friends read what you write?

Last week at one of my favourite blogs, The Professional Hobo, Nora wrote a very nerve-touching post about the lack of support she felt she got from friends when she published her first book – to summarise, she kind of expected a few more of them to buy and read it, and was disappointed when they didn’t. And I had to agree with a lot of her feelings and experiences.

Being a writer is a bit of a mysterious job. Unless you write (and get published, somewhere and somehow) yourself, I think it’s impossible to imagine how it really works. It’s easy to say “I want to write a book one day”, and if I had a dollar for every person who’s told me they think they’ll start doing some blogging “like you do” to earn some money (and think it’s really as easy as they make it sound), then I’d be a very wealthy girl. It’s such an intangible profession, and more so these days when people can make a living writing for the web, for example, rather than having a physical book on the shelves.

Friends and family reading your writing

When I first started getting some articles published, I was quite shy about sharing the results with people I knew. My Mum always got a copy first, of course, and always read it. She still reads a huge amount of what I write, no matter what the topic, and I heartily appreciate that (thanks, Mum! That’s her pictured, and she’s going to kill me for adding this photo). As I got more experienced at the whole publishing gig, and started to make at least half my living out of writing, then I got more confident about sharing magazine articles and website addresses with other family members and friends. But bear in mind, this was pretty much always non-fiction work.

I still have a hard time sharing my fiction work, but after my recent ABNA success have certainly got much better at it. I’m now not too worried about the time, some day in the future, when my friends and family will be able to go into a bookshop and read my novels. (Of course, if strangers read them, I’m more than happy about it. Strange, isn’t it!).

But my point – well, Nora’s point, really – is that a lot of my friends and family will never read any of my writing. Some of them are just not really readers, or might not be interested in the topic I write about, or in many cases have English as a second language and might feel it would be too difficult. But won’t they want to read it just because it came from me?

Apparently not. As an avid reader and writer, my perspective is obviously skewed. Whenever I’ve met someone who’s a published writer – it’s happened a few times that I’ve had colleagues with published novels – I’ve gone straight out to buy their novel, regardless of the topic. These are people I know, they write books, and I want to know what they write about. There’s no question about it for me. And so, unfortunately I guess, I kind of have these expectations about the people closest to me. But I also realise I have to let those expectations go.

So, from now on, I’m going to remember just to be grateful for the handful of family and friends who devotedly read what I write, and who I know will be lining up at their local bookstores one day to not only buy copies of my novels but also to sneakily shift them to more prominent places on the shelves. And I truly thank you people.

Do your family and friends read what you write? How do you feel about it? Let me know in the comments.

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November 15, 2009 by amanda

The thrill of writing returns

Flinders Ranges landscape

You may have noticed I haven’t stopped by this blog for a lil’ while. Sometimes life does get in the way of writing, no matter how hard you try to stop it, and that’s sure what happened this year. While I’ve kept up my paid blogging more-or-less, finding the mental space and the physical time to be creative hasn’t quite been there, for a bunch of now-not-so-important reasons that I might go into later.

What I find interesting, and wanted to share today, is the process of how the need and urge to write (creatively) comes back, or at least how it came back for me. There was no watershed moment, it really trickled back one little bit at a time. First, I found myself looking back at old blog posts, and checking that my log-ins still worked (and re-setting all my forgotten passwords in the process).

Then I started reading more, after slowing my usual crazy rate of getting through books. I also found myself re-reading some of the books I’ve always found most beautiful, like Salman Rushdie’s Midnight’s Children, with incredible, eloquent prose that simultaneously makes me jealous, and makes me want to get writing again. I started up writing freelance travel articles again – the kind where I get to be creative, and not have to make a point in the space of a short blog post – and have started posting at my Not A Ballerina blog again. In early morning classes, before any of my students arrived, I started stealing time to make notes about the next novel I want to write. And thus, the inevitable conclusion to this process was to start blogging again here at Becoming A Fiction Writer. Welcome back, me!

I have lots of plans for posts and topics over the next few months, and I look forward to connecting with old and new blogging and writing friends. I’ve got so much to tell you – my experiences with a literary agent, my ideas and plans for new novels, and hopefully, my journey as I try to write more of everything, and hopefully, finally get something written by me onto a shelf in a bookshop.

PS: Inspirational (for me, anyway) landscape is from our mid-year trip to the Flinders Ranges, South Australia.

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