Becoming A Fiction Writer
One girl, one dream … and a whole lot of procrastination
March 15, 2011 by amanda

Meeting your writing heroes – and speaking to them!

Like many writers, I can be a bit on the shy side. Now, some of you who know me personally might think I’m telling porkies, but it’s really true. If I’m teaching or training then that’s not a problem, and I’ve certainly got a lot less shy over the years, but the one thing that had eluded me until recently was the ability to go up and talk to famous people!

I’m not talking rock stars or presidents or anyone like that, because I’m sure I still wouldn’t have the guts to talk to them, but I have finally become just a little bit better at speaking to writers – who seem more like real people than weirdo celebrities, right?!

It all began very soon after the birth of my little boy, almost a year ago. My teenage-era hero, Australian journalist Jana Wendt, was coming to Perth to launch a book and there was an event scheduled right close to me. Problem was, I would most likely still be in hospital, or be nine and a half months pregnant and waiting. But (helpfully) my little boy arrived ten days early and so when the Jana Wendt event date rolled around, I decided to go. It was my first boy-less excursion and it was rather weird, but I really wanted to make the most of it. Knowing I had to get home quick-smart after the event finished (as my little one would probably be screaming the house down by then), I raced out of the lecture hall, bought her book and was third in line at the signing table.

Not content just to get my book signed, I willed myself to be brave enough to have a conversation. I blathered about how she’d been my hero as a teenager and I’d wanted to be a journalist because of her (her answer was something like she was sorry to hear that!), and I tell you, I was immensely proud of myself. And it seems this was the beginning of a new confidence.

At the recent Perth Writers Festival, I spoke to several authors after their presentations or events (at the very tent pictured above). Carmel Bird, an Aussie writing icon, and someone whose books have been sitting on my bookshelf forever, was just a normal person who liked the name of my son. Speaking with Natasha Lester, a local first-time novelist, reinforced for me that writers are ordinary people just like me, and that means that I could actually do it too. The only hero I didn’t get to meet was Ramona Koval – you’ve heard me rave about her ABC radio programme, The Book Show, before, and I sat enthralled through her role-reversal interview, but unfortunately I had a first birthday party (for a group of babies, mine included!) to dash to – I was already an hour and a half late, since I’d decided I couldn’t bear to miss seeing Ramona LIVE! I’ll just have to keep an eye out for another opportunity there – at least I know I’m brave enough already.

So my question for you: who’s the writing hero you’d love to meet? And are you brave enough to speak to them? Let me know in the comments.

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March 8, 2011 by amanda

Tips on getting published from the Perth Writers Festival

As part of the glorious Perth Writers Festival (always the literary highlight of my year!), I was very lucky this year to be able to take part in a day-long workshop: the A-Z of Getting Published. (Lucky because I had two willing babysitters!). It was chaired by Angela Meyer from the great Literary Minded blog and came in three parts – basically put, it started out with publishers, went to agents and then ended on publicity. The chance to actually hear from real-life publishers and agents was pretty special, and I took copious notes, laughed and cried, and went home both inspired and a little depressed. More inspired though, I’d have to say.

Now, I could give you a blow-by-blow account of what happened, but that’s already been done beautifully by a couple of other people who were there – so head over to Cristy Burne’s write-up (the quotes in the second half of the post from the various presenters are gold!) or All the World’s Our Page for some good summaries of what went on. All I want to talk about are the key messages I took home from the day. So, without further ado:

  1. VOICE. VOICE. VOICE. Nearly every member of every panel at this workshop mentioned that the most important thing they’re looking for in a novel (or other stuff, but especially novels) is a unique, original, enticing, beautifully-written VOICE. You have to sound like nobody else. You can tell the same story as everyone else, but you have to tell it in a way that only you can. Voice is something I’m often worried is lacking from my novels. I think it’s also very hard to “notice” your own voice. The question was raised of whether voice can be learnt and Mandy Brett (Text Publishing) said (to summarise) – sometimes. You can improve your voice with practice, and by reading (and reading, and reading), and some writers will “get it” and
    some won’t. Well I really hope I’m one of those writers who can develop a good voice. I’m sure going to try! It was also mentioned that if you are absolutely passionate about your story, you have a better chance of having a great voice.
  2. Your manuscript has one chance to impress. Therefore, it really truly really truly REALLY has to be its absolute best. John Harman, who (among other things) does manuscript assessment, gave me food for thought – getting a manuscript assessment done doesn’t seem as silly as I once thought – and the publishers and agent there certainly made it clear both through anecdotes and statistics that the chance of anyone noticing your novel manuscript is small enough without presenting the most perfect version you can. Which makes my decision not to send out my current manuscripts even firmer in my mind.
  3. Having an agent is basically essential these days. The publishers present (Random House, Text, Fremantle, UWA) gave some slush pile statistics (although, it must be said, they at least do read their slush piles, on a regular basis and with open minds and a sense of fairness, which I suspect may be more than other houses) and they are frightening. Text Publishing said they get between 300 and 400 unsolicited manuscripts per year and often won’t publish any of them. Fremantle Press said they had 654 unsolicited manuscripts sent in during 2010 and I’m not sure they published any of them – the entire output of the house for the year was only around 25 books, so it’s very unlikely. And so on. Needless to say, this has now utterly confirmed that there is no point in searching for a publisher myself, only an agent.
  4. I learnt a whole lot more, but I’ll tell them in conjunction with my tales of some of the other great discussions and presentations I saw at the Perth Writers Festival. Sometimes, it seems like an utterly ridiculous idea to try and become a published writer – the odds are definitely stacked against me (and everyone else), but you know, I just can’t not. Crazy but true.

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February 14, 2011 by amanda

Today’s for loving libraries (easy for me)

While many of you might know today as Valentine’s Day, my husband doesn’t usually recognise this event and luckily for him, I have also discovered that it is also Library Lovers’ Day here in Australia. Since I do sincerely love libraries, that seems a reasonable substitute and instead of a big bunch of flowers I’ll be happy to have an extra half hour or so to delve into one of the numerous exciting novels I currently have on loan from my local library.

Whichever way you’re celebrating, have a terrific day, and keep an eye out this week for news on my success (or otherwise …?) with my February goal of revising my novel. As a teaser, let’s just say it’s not going quite as well as the January month of poetry did – but more later. I’m off to enjoy a good book. Happy Valentine’s Day and Happy Library Lovers’ Day!

[Thanks to Andrew Stawarz for the pic]

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January 24, 2011 by amanda

Two fiction writing contests in a week

I’m really feeling like 2011 has got off to a great writing start. Is it the daily poetry that’s got my writing juices flowing? Is it the rush of a new year, new goals and new resolutions that hasn’t worn off yet? Or perhaps the fact that I’m super-super-busy, with new consulting work, courses to run all over the place and of course a small boy to take care of, and the old “if you want something done, ask a busy person” adage is kicking in again?

It’s probably a combination of all three, I think, but I’m certainly feeling enthusiastic about writing and squeezing in quite a lot of it. In the last week I managed to enter to short fiction contests. Okay, one was really REALLY short, but still took quite a lot of thought – I mentioned recently that I entered the Tweet Me A Story contest in which I had the chance to write three 140-character stories using the word “searching”. The great news is that one of my stories made the cut to the second round (top 25 out of 150 stories, I think) – my successful story was this:

Old Mr Gibbs was searching the death notices when the maid came up behind him, newly-changed will in one hand, heavy saucepan in the other.

If you like it, you can vote for it, although public voting only accounts for one of the five writers who get to advance to the next round later this week, where the successful tweeters have to put their 140-character thinking caps on all over again.

I also managed to get another entry in to the 24-Hour Short Story Contest that Writers Weekly runs on a quarterly basis. Regular readers will know I’ve often entered this contest, mainly because I love the idea of being “forced” to write a short (short) story (always under 1,000 words) within a 24-hour time period. A friend of mine who blogs at Because I Said So also entered with me this year, so it was great to be able to compare our stories and see what different ideas just the two of us (who have a lot in common) came up with from the same prompt. Of course, I’m never particularly happy with the story (or let’s be fair, the draft of a story) I come up with during the contest, but at least it adds to my collection of “to be edited” fiction and of course, keeps my brain and fingers in the writing mode.

For me, thats the main benefit of entering writing competitions – some pressure to keep writing. Do you often enter writing contests, and why or why not?

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January 13, 2011 by amanda

What writers should know about storytelling, which I sometimes forget

While I’m really all about beautiful words and poetry this month, I couldn’t help but realise that a post from The Blood-Red Pencil (great blog title!) was screaming at me. The post is from half-way through last year but came to my attention through Twitter this week and it’s called, simply and accurately, 10 Steps to a Better Story. Feel free to go away and read it now (as long as you promise to come back).

It is not a bang-you-over-the-head lecture, nor is it something unique and new that will amaze the socks off a writer, but it’s a list of things that I, for one, need reminding of pretty much constantly when I’m writing either a novel or short story. That your main character should want something AND do something – obvious, yes, but I sometimes don’t let the reader know what these wants are and then there’s not much motivation to keep reading, is there?! Also, the importance of introducing conflict early on is something I’ve often missed in my meandering opening chapters. I’m always at risk of spending too much time getting the characters and setting in there without giving the reader a reason to turn to the next page. And I excuse all that by saying perhaps I’m writing literary fiction, but surely there’s no real difference.

The final point on the list is for me, the most important, so I’m going to reproduce it entirely in case you didn’t go over and read it yourself:

The components of a novel that readers (and publishers) care about most are, in order: story, characters, theme, setting. If you have to sacrifice something, start at the end of list. Never sacrifice the story for anything else.

So, story is everything. I so often forget that. But I will keep trying to remember!

What’s your writing weakness from this list? And how do you remember to get around it?

(Thanks to kodomut for the great storytelling picture!)

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December 22, 2010 by amanda

January writing kick-start: Poetry to get beautiful words flowing

It’s all about synchronicity. Let me explain the chain of events:

  1. I gave the world a Christmas present then decided I should also give myself something. Yep, I’m greedy!
  2. It’s nearly the end of the year, the time when I always go all contemplative and dream up some new goals for the new year, especially when it comes to my writing, which by this time of the year has usually become a little neglected.
  3. Kristan Hoffman, my loyal commenter and a writer who inspires and motivates me, blogged about writing with beautiful words versus telling a compelling story, and I was reminded that I really want to work on my ability to use beautiful words.
  4. Sage Cohen – you might remember I reviewed her new book The Productive Writer recently – launched her new site, The Path of Possibility (in Writing and Life), and I felt like it could have been put together just for me and my needs!
  5. I decided that in 2011 I will focus on one thing each month (for example, submitting my existing novels; rewriting one of them; plotting my third novel which I’m itching to get going with, etc), because I’m normally reasonably successful at focusing on a task for a few weeks at a time, if I know it’s an intensive time to do just that one thing and not all the other writing kind of things at once.

And therefore … yes all this is leading somewhere … I’m going to start with working on “beautiful words” and to that end, I have signed up for Sage Cohen’s Poem-A-Day Challenge, which runs from January 1st to 31st, 2011. I definitely do not aim to be a poet. But poetry is where I have often been inspired by “beautiful” writing, and I have dabbled in writing poems before, and having some guidance and encouragement to write them regularly for a month will, I hope, give my writing a bit of a literary boost.

I’m also busily brainstorming what the other months of the year will focus on, but that’s a story for another day.

(Just for the record, I’ve even published my poetry before. Look! Here on my Not A Ballerina blog, I published this poem which I wrote when I was ten years old. I hope I have improved since …)

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November 30, 2010 by amanda

Daydreaming about book covers

What will the cover of your book like when you get it published? For as long as I can remember now, I’ve had the understanding that whatever I might imagine the cover should be, it’s absolutely out of my hands. This was confirmed when I read a recent post on Meanjin’s blog about What goes in to making a cover. Authors don’t get a say, and they sometimes even hate their book’s cover.

However, in the spirit of visualising success, it probably doesn’t hurt to daydream about the cover of your published novel, does it? I’ve often imagined how fun it would be to go into my favourite bookshops, find my novel in the K section (near Thomas Kenneally, I’ve always thought – an Aussie novelist whose surname would come just after mine) and shuffle it around into a more prominent position. The only thing missing in this scenario is I’ve never actually thought about what my book would look like, until now.

There’s one good reason why I should have nothing to do with the design of my book cover (and I suspect that this may be true in the case of many writers – it’s not always the case that the blessing of being good with words is accompanied by the talent of being good with pictures, too!). It would look awful. It would not sell, I suspect. But I still want to dream. So I decided to spend a few minutes drafting up my book covers, just so I’ve got something to look at. Please indulge me, and if you’ve got your own books in the pipeline (or even just ideas for them), go ahead and create your own book cover too, and let me know. We can create a whole library of virtual books that don’t really exist – yet!

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November 13, 2010 by amanda

Saturday night fun: Watching other people buy books

Warning: very book geeky post ahead. But at the same time, don’t judge me until you’ve tried this yourself.

Here’s the thing. I love The Book Depository. I first blogged about them a couple of years back when I discovered, much to my disgust, that the only way I could buy a relatively rare Australian novel for a price I could afford was to get it shipped (for free!) from The Book Depository, a UK-based company. Since then, I admit to using them almost exclusively as my source for books – not that I buy many (I’m a library freak and besides, my bookshelves are pretty jam-packed full), but when I do, that website usually gets the gig. Wide range, good service, very reasonable prices, quick delivery. No complaints.

And now while wandering around their website on a Saturday night, I discovered something super-cool. You can watch people all around the world buying books. In real time. On a Saturday night (or any time, really, but Saturday night seems to be a moment when I get a few spare seconds to do something geeky like this). Have a look what I saw:

Honestly, it’s incredibly fun: you watch the map of the world with new pop-up boxes appearing every few seconds showing what book has just been bought by customers in various countries. It’s like standing at the cashier looking over everybody’s shoulder, only heaps geekier, and heaps better. Go to The Book Depository Live to see it for yourself. My only complaint? They pin the pop-up box down in the middle of each country so it looks like all the Aussie customers are from somewhere right in the middle of Oz, pretty much exactly where nobody at all lives.

(Disclosure: Unnecessary. These guys (unfortunately) have not paid me a cent to rave about them, they have just been good to me over the years and, well, I couldn’t resist passing on some book geekiness to my fellow book lovers.)

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November 2, 2010 by amanda

Submitting my novel to agents: I have been told! (And what NaNoSuMo is)

I did promise you all, about three weeks ago (less than a month, which I consider a positive thing), that I would shortly be submitting either or both of my novels to agents (not both at once, of course), and that I would be getting queries out within the month.

Well, I have made a serious attempt at getting a list of agents together, only to be a tad disheartened to find how few there are in Australia (I’d rather look here first … I think there’s something a little Australia-centric about my novels) and then to let life and its other joys overtake my priorities once again.

However, this morning I woke up to an email with the subject line “Your novels” (of course that got my attention), and when I opened it, I realised I had to get a serious move on. It came from someone who I taught in my blogging course the other week (and, it should be said, is also a dear old friend of mine who I hadn’t seen in something like decades). It said:

OK sunshine

If I can manage to blog then I reckon you can send those novels to lots and lots of agents!!! I am sure they are brilliant and you will only die wondering otherwise.

If you just read the second paragraph, then that’s quite a fair exchange. It’s the “OK sunshine” that makes me feel like her foot is dangerously near my bottom. But so it should be because as a master procrastinator I do need a few good kicks sometimes!

So, I WILL make progress TODAY. Funnily enough, NaNoWriMo just started yesterday (National Novel Writing Month for the uninitiated, and the way I got my first novel drafted a few years ago) and I crazily put it on my to do list (with a lot of question marks and exclamation marks) for yesterday, just in case I decided that I would have enough time to squeeze in writing another novel just now. Obviously that’s impossible (I can’t give up what little sleep I have) but I have decided to create my own NaNoSuMo – National Novel Submitting Month – which does sound a little like a scary Japanese wrestling tournament, so I will just imagine that if I don’t get my novels off to agents soon then there will be oversized, less-polite-than-usual Japanese guys ready to punish me.

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October 6, 2010 by amanda

Book review: Hint fiction – it’s very, very short fiction!

I do love getting books to review, and one of the most appropriate I’ve been offered recently (given my well-documented lack of time these days) was Hint Fictionby Robert Swartwood. Its subtitle tells it all: “An anthology of stories in 25 words or fewer”.

Now, I must admit that before the review copy arrived, I was skeptical. I’m not a huge fan of the whole flash fiction thing because I find it hard to believe you really can tell a story without using at least a few pages. And 25 words seemed like a ridiculously low number. You may know that famous Hemingway six-word story:

For sale: baby shoes, never worn.

Some say yes, poignant, telling, what a story, and I say, I’ve got at least six pairs of baby shoes I was given for my own baby that he never wanted to wear, and I could sell them too, without having any sad story behind it. So yes, I was very skeptical before Hint Fiction arrived on my doorstep.

However, I’m also man enough (woman enough?) to admit that I’ve changed my tune. For a start, sending a collection like Hint Fiction to a new mother was genius. It was the kind of book I could get through in a day or two (writing the review has taken a little longer though!). Stories that are less than 25 words in length are ideal for those in-between minutes of life. And I was surprised and impressed at just how much story some writers could fit into their 25 words. The idea, Swartwood says, of “hint fiction” is that these couple of sentences suggest “a larger, more complex story” and in many cases they really do that, and send you right off into the realms of “what if” and “what else”.

The collection is divided into three parts – “Life & Death”, “Love & Hate”, and for all the miscellaneously-themed stories, “This & That”. Not every story impressed me – some seemed more like a random sentence out of a bigger story than a true “hint fiction” suggestion of something more – but enough got me thinking that I would highly recommend the book. Especially to mothers of young babies who are struggling to finish a book at the moment!

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